dude there is a train from welwyn to london. poor excuse, lol

OK OK

you're right, I'll try my best to make it

By the way, it was great hearing you're poem live, masha allah

Even your sheet of paper covered in milkshake, didn't stop you from going up to convey your message, which was wicked lol

I think i might have to take a leaf outta your book next time

Thanks for the lil nudge of encouragement bro, i have no excuses now.....not any that i can think of yet anyway

lol, ht e milkshake covered paper huh?! lol, i cant believe that happened man. Also, i dont have the skill and ability to rhyme like you guys do, just a passion for writing about my frustrations, lol and you are right, absolutely no excuse next time

Poems don't have to rhyme! That's the beauty of poetry I think, you can make it as you wish, mix 'n' match the styles, have it prose-like, repetition, it doesn't matter. I think all our members should try that whole free association thing where a phrase/ word/ bunch of words lead on from one another with whatever comes in your head and you are NOT allowed to amend it otherwise it defeats the purpose.

I'll start:

restless beings human die death morbid metal grease hair style fashionista scenester show-off trendsetter jet setter planes holidays nice nice curry and rice lots of spice