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 Post subject: Stages of love
PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 3:47 am 
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[font=Arial Black]This poem is about a character that i read about and fell in love with.

Lust
What pure and honest beauty,
Her names Iliana so full of grace and pride,
What beauty of hers is this reality?
This love hidden behind this elaborate smile,
You walk past me and my heart misses a beat,
Your childish smile etched in my soul,
Oh I dream of the day that we meet,
My love will shine through my soul,
You stand all alone and stare,
Am I dreaming of this beauty,
A simple smile will she care?
Why do i live this life of cruelty

Infatuation
My fantasies are all about you,
Unrequited love is who i am,
When will I ever be with you,
A Thoughtless soul is who I am,
A breath taking smile leads to open arms,
I just want to say hello to you,
I'm so confused why cant I stay calm,
I cant live without being without you.

A simple gesture, she smiles.
A thousand beats miss my heart,
How my life changed just for a while,
I realised this was just the start,
I try to stare all day and night,
Wishing that you would look back,
If I could read your thoughts tonight,
I would know why you never look back.

You leave me crippled as you walk away,
For I would give a thousand lifetimes to be with you,
Is there anyway to make you stay,
Im praying that I can be with you,
Is there somthing left for me to hold on to?
I cant help but to dream a dream with you,
But still I feel as if I dont love you.

Test
Alot has happened through circumstances,
Her names Iliana I love her so,
What we achieved with these chances,
Say its right, She loves me so.
An angel by my side i have no care,
She means the world to me and so much more,
This angel of mine does she care,
I'm scared that theres no evermore,
I love her, does she love me?
Are we in love or is this a dream,
These fictious thoughts haunt me,
A test of love has no mercy,
Will this surpass this feeling of blue,
Aslong as we have love theres no worry.
A simple cry of a love so true.

Remnants
As I look through these mirrors shadows of you still remain,
Her name was Iliana she loved me so,
Once you were mine so why do I complain,
Is there anything left for me to do,
I feel the burn but still I pray,
That one day you'll be in my arms once again,
What could i have done to make you stay,
I just wish i didnt torture you with this pain,
Questionable actions keep me in doubt,
I have been love 999 times with you,
But still i wonder what 1's about,
A shadow of a thought left beside you,
Relentlessly I regret or should I repent,
Am I to blame that I was an amature,
For I have tarnished a godsend,
Am I to blame for being immature,
A crippled angel left to be alone,
I walk away without my soul,
With my tail between my legs blinded by the sun
As my cry turn into a howl,
I learnt what a burden I can be,
But can i express the love you once showed me?

Untitiled
Ask me how i am i may not reply,
Ive ran around in circles chasing a tail,
I'm still trying to break the tie,
I'm in loves prison and theres no bail,
I held your hand to say goodbye,
A loosened group would've lead me to fall,
I'm better off without you but still I hang on,
Theres no way I can climb this wall,
My fading memories endure me to linger on,
Still you smile as our eyes meet,
That simple gesture that keeps me hanging,
I'll do anything to stand on my own two feet,
But why do you leave my heart tingling,
I wish I had never met you at all,
Please tell me theres no us anymore,
I'm a slave to love who answers every call,
Through the times we shared I lost forever,
Atleast I have loved and lost than not loved at all.

copyright belongs to Shorif Ahmed

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 3:38 pm 
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Very interesting indeed!
But I'm curious, who is this character, where would we have seen her?


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:58 pm 
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Its about the character in a book that youve read which amazes you and you feel that you have a deep conection with. thank you


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 12:13 pm 
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whats the name of the book shorif?

there are lashes of briliance in this and its very readable in the sense that the more i read, the more intrigued i got. well done matey!


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 1:07 pm 
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Shorif, this reads really well.

I like the build up.
Do tell us who the character is and what narrative ? I am very curious.
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