My dad is a simple man
He doesn't have a life plan
As he approaches the end
He embraces and doesn't pretend
For this is what we all amount to be
In the end we see our lifeless body
This is how it's meant to be
This is what's in store for you and me
The fate of this man
Who doesn't have a life plan



This is a little nod to an obsession of mine in thought. It's self explanatory as to what the theme is. The piece itself is quite informal in its presentation, little or no changes made to the original and is perhaps flawed in many aspects but what the hey, 'tis what being human is all about eh? Oh yeah, and I wrote it, if you're wondering. Honest comments appreciated, however critical <gulp>

Aysha

you say its simple, yet it is still very effective, like it a lot!

I really really really like thsi Shan

Shan, its fuss free strong poetry

sometime teh no frills approach to writing produces the best pieces of work